User blog comment:Ohmpahkan/Cycle of life/@comment-1011548-20110410194910/@comment-3298463-20110410201621

It is pretty good. I'll try to write something tomorrow, I'm still kinda busy today. Don't worry, Lord Loss, I will join you, and we will achieve something great. Mwahahaha!

The only thing I would correct is to mention the Rajang's name while you are describing it. I'm just saying that because it might appear a bit sudden to drop its name when the fight with the Blangos has already started, at least to a reader that doesn't know what a Rajang is. Other than that, I like it.

Tomorrow I have my last exam before easter, so I'll be free then.