User blog comment:Littlemilton/The fall of the ancient and the birth of the new truth (My fanfic)./@comment-3165559-20101223144751/@comment-2053489-20101223174509

ok.... Sorry but i don't like it at all. The music part is a good idea, thought about it too but stoped it then.

What I really don'z like here is how much it is jsut a ridiculous combination of countless manga strips and half a written story. If I would see the connection between al of it, it could be good. But I son't see anything. I am just extremely confused.

Chapter 1 was a great start. But I don't like this, sorry.