User blog comment:Bradyl888/The story of nibui/@comment-2146544-20110201042941/@comment-3253026-20110201043528

Well, it's just sometimes you don't add commas and punctuations and sometimes it makes the sentence sound all funky. For example " I don’t really mind cause after a few more strikes into the body of the Popo I sheathe my weapon and start to skin some meat out off him" you could've added a comma between"Popo" and "I" there are some other spots were this happens and it makes the sentence sound all weird.