User blog comment:Gamer4845/Fanfiction:Let The Monster Hunting Begin!/@comment-2053489-20101029163559/@comment-2053489-20101030134851

Hmmm, hard to say. The basic idea is ok and one can understand what you mean, but your writing style isn't the best. I'd give it something between 5.5 and 7.5, hard to decide.

Jit would be more if you'd come with own ideas XD I have no problem with it, but using too much ideas of others seems a bit uncaring.

other than that, it is not so shitty like other stuff i've seen in the wikia. With the time, you'll get the idea and improve, just don't cease and keep learning. :D