User blog comment:Hoohah/FanFic Idea/@comment-2071518-20100825213838

Your Fanfic has potential, Hoohah, gonna be honest. There are some things to improve on, like how you introduce characters. Or even weapons. Someone might read this with no idea WTH you're going on about.

Basically, let them find out what the armor and weapons are made out of themselves. I try to do that with my fanfic, like Krono's Rathian armor.Try to give a description.