User blog comment:Lord Loss/Monster Appreciation Week: Stygian Zinogre/@comment-5353328-20130902203504/@comment-5178018-20130903234355

@HellWolf: 'Thou' places possesion over a subject, should there be one. With no subject, yes it means "you", but when a subject that entitles possesion over something is stated it turns to "your". I do admit though, better wording could have been used. If I hadn't made it in under ten minutes. >.> Reading through I realised I used the word "raze" twice so of course itès not of the greatest quality.

I didn't even write it wanting feedback to be honest, I just wanted DeviljhoKiller to see an example of a different poetry style. His consists of AABBCCDD but mine uses a slightly (and I mean very slightly) more complex style of AABBCDCD, and having it still work. If he can use even more complex poetry styles, I can see to it that his quality will increase. In fact poems don't even need rhymes so long as the wording used is artistic and desriptive.

@Cheatingtaco: Props to you. You almost made me laugh.