User blog comment:Lord Loss/Monster Appreciation Week: Stygian Zinogre/@comment-5353328-20130902203504/@comment-5178018-20130903002102

My Stygian Zinogre Poem, because I can.

"An evil upon the cloud filled skies,

Upon it's call thou will shall die.

amongst these lands, be burnt or froze,

razed and wrecked, it's hatred grows.

Should it's howl meet Reaper's grin,

The Haze of Hell, the wolf from Styx,

Raze these fools for all their sins,

reduce their souls down to bits."

I only wanted to give it a try, but some advice for you, don't push yourself. It almost seems as though yours was made on the spot (well, mine was but uh... yeah), and really doesn't look like you placed as much effort into this one. And I know you're still trying, and it's brilliant, believe me, but you should try other styles of poetry and level your state of mind. It's an art, and takes time for a pleasing result, so take your time, maybe even make more than one poem on paper and give us the one you feel is best. I'll look forward to the next one.