User blog comment:Lord Loss/Monster Appreciation Day: Lagiacrus/@comment-4577324-20111122004150/@comment-4996937-20120731160249

No offense but ill post the postive thoughts AND the negative ones so don't feel sad:

Positive: Nice chapter i also like the start, its not like "Once upon a time" or "One day in a distant land", keep going bro!

Negative: Grammar, a tip for fixing that is to read the chapter more than once and fixing grammatical mistakes P.S. pay attention in grammar class LOL (just kidding)

i also find all these lagiacruses (is that who they say it? idk) impossible to be in one place and lagiacruses are more independant than co-operative (atleast i think so).