User blog comment:Lord Loss/Monster Appreciation Day: Lagiacrus/@comment-4577324-20111122004150

Hi. I am writing a book about three guys who become monster hunters. here is the first chapter of my first book "Here i am. surrounded by a pack of lagiacrus's. nine subspiecies and eleven normal. One of them,a subspicies, is the biggest one, and its the one thats closest. they all keep getting in closer. the leader nips at me, but obviously i don't get bit. a normal one nips at me but i dodge him. i then see twelve of them nipping at me, including the leader. i jump on the third smallest's back. i start running for my life. nineteen of them start chasing me. the leader stays back. i figured that the others would bring him my dead carcace, to feed on. they surrounded me. i knew this was my end. good-bye, cruel world." that chapter was called "death by leviathan" how do you like it? reply and tell me how it is.