User blog comment:Ohmpahkan/Cycle of life/@comment-1011548-20110511171854/@comment-3298463-20110511183612

It's good, very good. I'm actually learning a lot of vocabulary from your stories, especially for fight scenes and such.

If you want a suggestion, the first time I read it I didn't quite get which one of the two Bulldromes was dragged by the Plesioth (because it was a Plesioth, right?). But then I understood, so it's okay.

P.D: It was the big one, right?